Saturday, September 3, 2011

Just hang on.

Tears, running down your face,
And unlocking your hearts to
Finish the race.

Blood, gambling for your soul,
And cushioning carnality to
Keep you unwhole.

Love, distracting death, with
It's beautiful malice that
Protects your last breath.

Screams, pure but cracked,
That hide from fear while
Your faith is attacked.


  1. This is an amazing poem, Logan. You are a great writer! And I'm not just saying that.

  2. Thanks I really enjoy writing, I guess that could make it more enjoyable. This is one of the poems that I have written that I think is... OK

  3. Don't forget to comment on my other stuff too, I love any kind of feed back and opinions. If you want to see mor of my writing go to watt and my username is logan laboube